thoughts about inner writting

ah, is not my type to criticize someone’s ideas, but Cherles Bernstein affirmations intrigue me. I certainly do not agreed with him by simple fact that he’s limiting our thinking. what it differentiate us one from another, is our inner thinking. most of us share same living conditions, but when Bernstein is pointing where the formation of poems resides, it just turn me over.

The marix of social and historical relations are more significant? than any personal qualities of the life or voice of the author? is like you are living, thinking and working  for somebody. What do you think? what about your thoughts? can you ever describe what you are felling if your inner voice cannot be heard?

the personal qualities shape the concept of the text, or  the poem without being influenced by the society. 

preliminary discourse

A Traveler’s Discourse

  

*Exploring

            The lovely earth- limited to our discoveries and knowledge.

*surrounding elements

            Nature with its components-water, land, life and fire

*arctic, dessert and jungle

            Opposite places that are challenging surviving within

*embracing the elements

            Human interference with the nature-water dome, suspended and buried highways,

*urbanism and nature

Nature is The place for relaxation, after living in the urban society.

*the big picture

            Where are we going?

Living your life is based on surviving to the conditions encounter during lifetime.

I should probably change the discourse title, to A Survival’s Discourse, but I think that I dare too much already by choosing a theme, which is part of my dreams.

I will base my discourse on several movies, 7 years on Tibet, Apocalypto and Around the World in Eighty Days (Jules Verne’s novel).

http://www.online-literature.com/verne/aroundtheworld/